14 Jun

The Barbie broke,blue eyed,
Questions and more,friends chide.
Awoken,by the lion’s roar,
Napkins from a grocery store.
Teacher,teacher goes the game,
Now its who am I? Wheres my fame?

Dance for guests,sing temple song,
Check ones waist,the line of a thong.
Cook n clean,burnt fingers,
Does he love me….thoughts linger.
Chicken pox,popeye,alladin,
Stoned ,hash,vodka,gin.

Naked in the sun,lisp on tongue.
Left now with layers of dust.
No doubt,lotsa lying n whining,
Folks say,”u grown up!stop crying!”

Innocence stays,intelligence lost,
Intelligence stays,innocence frost.

Now now..hoping u hv read the verses above and made little or no sense of it..
i urge u to read them again..this time acknowledging that ..
every odd line represents “adolescence”
& every even line represents “youth”…..


3 Responses to “SURROGATE REBIRTH”

  1. ruhey June 14, 2006 at 9:18 pm #

    Girl..really like this creation of urs…itz got the thing which makes u say..’whoa’!
    keep it up!

  2. Anonymous June 16, 2006 at 1:08 pm #

    I love this one… amazing… work!


  3. Rachna June 17, 2006 at 10:58 am #

    love it

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